Mrs Gloss has an ugly, horrible and disgusting face!

The children in Year 3 have been writing descriptions of a brand new character.  We have seen some fantastic work with similes, adjectives and commas to separate items in a list!  Here is an extract from  Ryan’s work.  ​”Mrs Gloss has an ugly, horrible and disgusting face.  Her teeth are black and bruised.  Her breath smells like stinky, rotten eggs because she doesn’t brush them.”  We definitely have the next Roald Dahl or David Walliams in our year group!

Mrs Toms

 

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